These are the re-worked collages from the comments i have received during our pin up. I was portraying my ideas to literally; and didn't show myself enough in them, so I made them a little more abstract.
The feeling I had when we visited the sight is abandoned, but I also felt lonely and cold. The feeling of loneliness was caused by the lack of activities going on around the site, and the fact that it was filled with vacant factories. For that reason I included a person in the ocean by themselves, a man on the moon looking towards earth, the forever alone meme and Meg Griffin (Family Guy). The coldness i felt is displayed by the photo depicting a cold rainy day and a bench with no one on it on a winter night. The feeling of abandonment is depicted by the graffiti on the walls of an abandoned factory.
When thinking of the feeling of connection with the site certain images came into my head. The pictures showing the chain, the paper clips, the hands and the bridge are representing the physical connections we have in our lives. The telescope shows our connection with things that are far from us, The Olympics shows our connections with people from around the world, and the molecules which are present in all living and non-living things, shows hows everyone and everything is connected.
My program depicts the activities that I am going to be involving in my design. Since I want to design a Sports/ Recreation Center mostly sports icons are shown. For the sports involved have cleats, a football jersey, a fishing rod, a turf field and soccer fans. For the store inside the center I depicted the Modell's and Nike logo because the store will have sport supplies. And the drunk man depicts the sports bar that will be located on the premises as well.
The collage of your project could be much more inspiring. I would look at the motions of the athletes and the different types of sports. The logos of Models and Nike do not tell me anything - why not show rows of helmets, sport shirts, shoes....
ReplyDeleteI agree with Jill above - the program colalge needs to be inspiring. HaAve a creative think what your focus is for the program of your building? is is corporate branding or is it motivational sport, motion and movement, community and people.
ReplyDeleteYour collage should create an enthusiastic and animated program.
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